good ole post its ;)
I think this sets the scene well for mobility to and around space from the metal stairwell at top, and means the smaller shed is partially hidden. distance between sheds unclear yet- need more experiments with lenses.
need to celebrate and push the eccentricity of the piece now-the mad, playfulness of it in the uses of different technologies, and work on natural self, once dissertation out of way, re-read more non-matrixed, autobiographical performance, engaging with participation theory/ others' works, ensuring work is framed correctly. there are lots of technical issues- least of all getting and building sheds! plus possibly getting a lens with a better diaopter (try +0.5 rather than + 1 and see what happens)